tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13065040.post115320943295658226..comments2023-10-30T05:01:05.979-07:00Comments on Coagulate: i wrote a sestinaErik Bearhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18151425997101617833noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13065040.post-1153848970296964382006-07-25T10:36:00.000-07:002006-07-25T10:36:00.000-07:00Erik Bear! I just remembered now that you told me...Erik Bear! I just remembered now that you told me you wrote a sestina, and then I rushed to your journal to read it. <BR/><BR/>I like it a lot! I really like the words you chose to use, like "keen" and "skirl." And this line: "If not a shrine on pitch-dark water." It has a good rhythm, I think. The imagery is really well done, because it's pretty in a sad sort of way. <BR/><BR/>I feel like I'm not very good at expressing how much I like artistic things, because I can't comment in as nice a language as you write, but I really do like it alot.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com